Tuesday, 13 November 2012

Improvements? PEER REVIEW TIME!

So guys, here's my cover page I'm making so far, trying to patch the image up to make myself look pretty! (and feel pretty *Desperation for attention mode on*) But I want to hear what you guys think, I want critiques people! Talk about my colour scheme or what I can do for arrangement and other stuff like that. Tell me how skinny I am, anything will be great, (I'm the asian one!).

8 comments:

  1. I like the way the models are looking at the camera and seem to have an attitude. I think that even though the layout seems a bit messy i think it suits the style of the magazine, the color sceme is great by the way!! :D

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  2. You could edit the image, so it stands out more and doesn't blend in with the dark text? Making it brighter will help! But I really like it!

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  3. First of all, really lovin the front cover! the only improvement I would say is try and make it a bit less crowded, tis all :)

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  4. There's a lot going on so I think you could tone down a bit but other than that it all looks really good so far! well done :)

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  5. It looks soooo good! As the other comments said it is a TAD crowded but i think if you move the title down away from Joannas face it'd be better for sure :)

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  6. heyyy cinddyy it looks so good! well done :)

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  7. Hey hunnyy! Absolutely love it. Very striking. Stay beautiful!

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